如何提高初中英语写作能力经典集锦

小编为大家整理的这20篇英语范文涵盖了初中三年涉及到的所有英语写作话题，包括学习、健康、网络、生活、环保、礼仪等，会为你的英语写作提供清晰的思路和丰富的素材，多看、多记、多思，中考英语考场上你一定能够像这些小作者一样，写出优秀满分英语作文的!

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如何提高初中英语写作能力经典集锦 1

（1）注意篇章结构，合理布局

开始部分（opening paragraph）说出文中的要点、核心问题。

正文部分（body paragraph）围绕主题展开叙述、讨论。

结尾部分（concluding paragraph）对全文内容进行总结和概括。

作文整体要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯，前后呼应，去除与主题无关的内容。

（2）确定主题句

主题句是全文对概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主旨句最好放在作文的开头，而后是对全文主题句所提出的内容进行解释、论述。

写主题句应该注意一下几点：

归纳出文章的几个要点；提炼出一句具有概括性的话；题句赢具有可持续性，抓住、吸引读者。

重要连接词

要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词

表示顺序增加

First, second, third,

First, then / next, after that / next, finally

For one thing … for another…,

On (the) one hand…on the other hand,

esides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also,

Especially / In particular,

表示时间顺序

ow, at present, recently,

after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,

at first, in the beginning, to begin with,

later, next, finally,

immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment

form now on, from then on,

at the same time, meanwhile,

till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,

表示解释说明

ow, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover

furthermore, in fact, actually

表示转折关系

ut, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other

hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of

course, after all,

表示并列关系

or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either …or, neither

…nor

表示因果关系

ecause, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a

result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that

表示条件关系

as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless

表示让步关系

though, although, as, even if, even though, whether …or…, however, whoever,

whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when,whom)

表示举例

for example, for instance, such as…, take… for example

表示比较

e similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)…just like,

just as,

表示目的

for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,

表示强调

in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly,

obviously, above all,

表示概括归纳

in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, As we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary, in conclusion,

初中英语作文写作技巧,高分英语作文写作方法

初中作文的困惑与对策

困惑1：写什么？

以《How to learn well?》为题，写一篇作文，那么我们应该如何入手开始写作呢？来看看以下几张思维导图，能够帮你整理好一篇作文的写作框架。

困惑2：如何选材？

即使知道了写作框架，但在补充框架时又会遇到另一个困惑：如何选材？以下是一些关于写作选材的建议：

1．选定英语思维导图各区域所需的词块和语块。

2．将各区域的词块和语块按段落写成连贯的语篇。

3．对照思维导图自我批改，注意人称、时态语态、句型结构的正确使用。

困惑3：如何表达？

很多学生在写作时，使用的句式比较单一，因此文章大多雷同，缺乏个性。 针对这些问题，我们可以从以下几个方面改进：

1．对相同意思，注意不同句式的表达法，选择更好的句式。

2．短文写作，表达力求精悍、生动、丰富，避免重复用一样的句式。

3．特别注意使用承上启下的词语和句子。

如何提高初中英语写作能力经典集锦 2

亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。

要求：1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟;2.词数80左右。

【优秀满分范文】

My English Study

How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.

When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.

In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.

中考英语写作范文(三)

父亲节马上就要到了，但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展，并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右，开头和结尾以给出(不计入总词数)。

提示：1.如果有足够的零花钱，可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西，如领带等：

2.还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如为父亲准备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。

【优秀满分范文】

Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.

If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.

o matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?

中考英语写作范文(四)

请根据提示以“The Spring Festival”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。

提示：1.春节是中国最重要的节日;

2.人们大多回家过年，家庭成员团聚;

3.家人一起吃团年饭、看电视、拜访亲朋好友(friends and relatives);

4.孩子们喜欢春节。

【优秀满分范文】

The Spring Festival

The Spring Festival comes in wenter. It is the most important traditional festival in China.

eople usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives.

Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.

中考英语写作范文(五)

假设Linda是你的好朋友，你们两年没有见面了。上个星期她从国外留学回来，你们很高兴见到彼此。请根据提示，简要介绍Linda的变化。

提示：1.外貌：以前个子矮，短发;现在个子高多了，长发。

2.爱好：以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天;现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步。

3.性格：以前外向;现在有些内向。

要求：1.不要逐字翻译，适当发挥;

2.层次清晰，语言流畅;

3.80词左右。

【优秀满分范文】

Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years.

he used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite.

I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.

中考英语写作范文(六)

背景设定：最近，康敏的加拿大朋友Michael给他发来电子邮件，想了解康明家乡的变化。假如你是康敏，请根据以下提示，给Miachael回一封电子邮件。

过去

生活条件差，道路狭窄，车辆少，住不好，吃不饱，联系不便......

现在

生活条件优越，道路宽，车辆多，住得舒适，手机普及......

要求：1.围绕以上内容进行合理表述;

2.所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面;

3.词数80词左右，开头语以给出(不计入词数)。

参考词汇：living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通讯)，telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Michael,

You want to know sthe changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.

In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house. Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.

Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.

incerely

Kang Min

中考英语写作范文(七)

随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。

优点

1.       足不出户；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累。

2.       价格通常比较便宜。

3.       可供选择的范围广，品种多。

缺点

1.       只能看到图片，看不到商品本身。

2.       容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。

注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面;

2.80词左右，开头文章已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：网购 shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商品 goods; 导致 cause

【优秀满分范文】

With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.

hopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.

Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internert. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.

All in all, I love shopping online.

中考英语写作范文(八)

假如你是李华，今年上初三了，现在的生活和以前大不一样了。请你根据自身的情况写一篇文章介绍一下自己的变化。词数：60-80。

【优秀满分范文】

I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks.

I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have to spend all my free time studying.

I really miss my old days.

中考英语写作范文(九)

某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep a good relationship with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。

要点：1.父母规矩太多，过于强调学习成绩，不理解自己等问题;

2.你对这些问题的看法;

3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。

【优秀满分范文】

How to keep a good relationship with parents

In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.

However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.

In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework.

中考英语写作范文(十)

今天是母亲节。假定你是李华，请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下：

1. 表述你与母亲间的情感;

2. 为母亲制作一张卡片;

3. 帮助母亲做点事;

4. 陪母亲散步等。

注意：1.词数80左右;

2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥;

3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear John,

It’s Mother’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it?

I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me.

Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much. I’m sure she’ll be very happy.

What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

中考英语写作范文(十一)

英语课代表分发试卷的时候发现了一份没有署名的试卷，成绩为满分。请你帮助课代表分析它会时谁的。

要求：1.设想当时的情景，适当扩展细节;

2.书写工整，100词左右。

参考词汇：top student优等生;handwriting笔迹;full marks满分

【优秀满分范文】

we had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out. There’s a paper without a name on it and that student got full marks.

Whom can it belong to? It can’t be a boy’s, because none of them in class can be so good and tidy. The paper must belong to a girl because its handwriting is very tidy. There are only three girls who are good at handwriting — Rose, Mary and Lucy. It might belong to Rose, but I’m not sure because she is not so good at English.

It can’t be Mary’s. Although she is a top student in English, she has already had hers in hand. So it must belong to Lucy. Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too. Well, it must belong to her.

中考英语写作范文(十二)

现在很多中学生都喜欢流行歌曲。请你根据下面的调查结果，写一篇80词左右的短文。

                 

kind

reason

a   few

quiet   music

make them feel comfortable

many

musicians who can write their own lyrics

cool

most

music that they can dance to

full of energy

【优秀满分范文】

owadays more and more middle school students like pop songs.

A few of them like quiet music because they think quiet music makes them feel comfortable. Many of the students like musicians who can write their own lyrics. Why? They think it’s cool to express their own feelings. Most of the students like music that they can dance to. They think the music is full of energy. When they are tired or bored, they can dance to the music.

中考英语写作范文(十三)

假如你是郭佳，你的美国笔友Linda给你写了一封信，说她想给自己的汉语老师送一份礼物来表达自己的感激之情，但是她不知道中国的送礼习俗，所以请你给她一些建议。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一封回信给她。

提示：1.要根据个人喜好选择礼物;

2.礼物的包装不要使用白色或者黑色包装纸(wrapping paper);

3.不要送钟、鞋或者梨。

要求：1.语意通顺，条理清楚;

2.80词左右。(信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数)

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Linda,

I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country.

Firstly, I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes. Choosing the gift that your teacher is interested in is a good idea. Secondly, don’t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper, because black and white aren’t considered to be lucky colors. Thirdly, don’t buy your teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift.

I hope my advice can help you.

Yours,

Guo Jia

中考英语写作范文(十四)

刚到中国来学习不久的John应汉语老师的邀请去他家里做客，因此John 向Bob请教相关礼仪。假设你是Bob,请你给John回一封电子邮件，告诉他一些注意事项。80词左右，开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

【优秀满分范文】

Dear John,

I know that you will visit your Chinese teacher’s home. If you do the following, I don’t think you will feel uncomfortable.

First, you should arrive a little earlier. Being late is impolite. Second, it’s also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit. Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner. Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food. You’d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating. Finally, after dinner, showing thanks is also necessary. And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner.

Good luck!

Yours,

ob

中考英语写作范文(十五)

假设上周六晚上，你们全家在一家饭店就餐。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述事情发生的经过，并适当加以评论。

要点提示：

1. 邻桌年轻人大声说话、吸烟。

2. 你请他们不要那样做。

3. 他们不听，反而嘲笑你。

4. 你认为：①他们在公共场所那样做是不对的。

②年轻人是祖国的未来，应该......

参考词汇：嘲笑laugh at

要求：

1. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

2. 要点齐全，行为连贯，可适当发挥。

【优秀满分范文】

Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a resturant.

We enjoyed ourselves while we were at table. However, some teenagers sitting beside our table began to talk and laugh loudly. What’s worse, they began to smoke in the restaurant, which made us angry. After a while, I stood up and advised them to stop smoking and behave themselves. To my surprise, they didn’t follow my suggestions. Instead, they laughed at me, saying that I was too young and too naive.

In my opinion, it’s wrong to do that in public. The future of our courtry lies in teenagers, who should not only obey the rules in public but also make contributions to the society.

中考英语写作范文(十六)

健康对我们来说非常重要，我们可以用很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示，以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，倡议“健康生活”，从三个方面说明如何保持健康。短文首句已给出，不计入总词数，可适当发挥。

1

food

a balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, less   meat...

2

exercise

do more exercise, take a walk, play ball   games...

3

happiness

keep happy, make friends, smile...

【优秀满分范文】

Good Ways to Keep Healthy

It is very important for us to keep healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us healthy?

First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat. Different kinds of food are necessary, it’s also important to eat a balanced diet.

Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit. We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school instead of taking a bus, after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends. We should try to do more exercise every day.

Happiness is another way to keep healthy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends. It is a good way to keep us happy. If you smile often, you also feel happy. So, be happy to be healthy.

中考英语写作范文(十七)

健康一直是人们关注的问题，我校要举行以“关爱健康”为主题的主题班会，请根据以下内容谈谈你的看法。

1. 保持健康的重要性;

2. 保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜;每天锻炼一小时;早睡早起;勤洗手;

3. 自己的看法(至少一条)。

注意：1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名;2.内容可适当扩展。3.字数60-80词;4.文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

【优秀满分范文】

oys and girls,

It is very important for us students to keep healthy.

There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn't drink wine or smoke .They are bad for our health.

Thank you.

中考英语写作范文(十八)

近20年来，各方面的调查表明：青少年的体质不断下降。请你以“How to keep healty”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，说说你的看法和建议。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

主要内容包括：

1. 体质下降的原因。如：eat too much junk food, have too much homework...

2. 合理的健康建议。如：should do more exercise, eat a balanced diet(饮食平衡), enough sleep...

【优秀满分范文】

How to keep healthy

owadays students’ physical fitness is declining year by year. I think there are some reasons.

tudents have too much homework to do, so they have little time to have sports. Some students eat too much junk food. That’s also bad for their health.

Then, how to keep healthy? Here is some useful advice. First, students should do more exercise. Second, students should eat a balanced diet. They should eat more vegetables and fruits, and try to eat less junk food. Finally, enough sleep is also very important.

中考英语写作范文(十九)

节约资源，保护环境，从身边的小事做起。作为一名学生，我们应该怎样看待“低碳”生活?请以“My low — carbon life”为题写一篇短文，简述自己对“低碳”生活的理解及看法。80词左右。

提示：1.步行或骑自行车上学;

2.节约用水;

3.不用塑料袋;

4.节约用电;

5.充分使用纸张。

参考词汇：on foot, turn off, recycle, make full use of, plastic bag, tap

【优秀满分范文】

My low-carbon life

ow the human living environment is becoming worse and worse. So a new lifestyle called low-carbon life is spreading to every part of our country. As middle school students, how can we have a low-carbon life?

Firstly, we can go to school on foot or by bike. Secondly, we shouldn’t waste water or electricity. Do remember to turn off the lights when we leave the room and turn off the tap in time after using it. Thirdly, we should use colth bags in our daily life instead of plastic ones. Fourthly, we should also make full use of paper. We’d better recycle some of our textbooks.

It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.

中考英语写作范文(二十)

为配合我市“礼仪宜宾(Charm Yibin)”活动的开展，某学校开展以“How to behave well”为主题的英语作文，请你以一名中学生的身份写一篇60-80词的短文参赛。

内容包括：1.守时，不说脏话;2.礼貌待人，热心助人;3.遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾;4...

注意：1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名;2.内容可适当扩充。

【优秀满分范文】

How to behave well

As a student in Yibin, we should behave well.

First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules.

Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in our life.

如何提高初中英语写作能力经典集锦 3

一、了解高分作文的特点

要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点：

1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。

2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。

3、要点齐全，不缺要点。

4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。

5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。

6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。

7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。

8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。

9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。

10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。

二、勤积累，巧准备

要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：

1、牢记课标词汇是基础

一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。

2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法

要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢?这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，对于as soon as、stopsome body from doing something、other、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。

3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式

高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来?靠我们在平时学习过程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫乏?假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、give somebody a hand、give a hand to somebody、be in need of等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢?

像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有My name is Jim.I’m Jim.I’m called/named Jim.I’m a boy called/named/with the name of Jim.等等。

表达年龄的方式有：She is 12.She is 12 years old.She is aged 12.She is a girl of 12(years old)。She is a girl aged 12.等等。

很显然，使用高级一点的更好。

4、加强练习，积累经验

学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。

5、充分利用作文范文

很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。

我们怎么利用它们呢?首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。

另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。

6、背诵一些谚语和警句

作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。

三、精心审题，沉着写初稿

很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。

其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢?

审题主要要做一下事情：

1、审人称、时态、体裁等

审题时，要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不会犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想想，那还能得高分吗?

2、明确必须表达的要点

高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把必须表达的要点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。

3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个?

4、确定好如何分段

就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些?

英语写作检查的原则：

(1)内容要点：缺少一个内容要点，文章直接降到第三档

(2)语法错误：动词三单形式，时态，语态，单复数，主谓一致，冠词等

(3)变换句式：过于简单的结构要试着变化，从句，固定句型的正确使用。

(4) 拼写：单词的拼写、大小写和标点符号，卷面的整洁。

初三英语作文优秀范文       写作练习：(人物篇)

写人作文是中考的热门题材之一， 写这类作文时要注意以下几点：

1. 描写人物时，不能面面俱到，泛泛而写，要重点突出其鲜明特征，以表现与其他人物的不同之处。

2. 叙述与人物有关的事情时，要分清主次，前后照应，选取典型事例来刻画人物。

3. 描写人物时，一般在结尾处要对人物进行评价，抒发自己对人物的情感。

基本框架

人物

art 1 外貌

性格

时间

art 2 过程

事件 结果

art 3 感受

写作评分标准及进步方向：

内容要点

应用词汇: 高级词汇的合理使用(energetic, intelligence)、同义词的变化使用(以like\beautiful为例)、短语的恰当使用(come up with)

语法结构的准确性：适当运用较复杂的语法，固定句式(感叹句、强调句、倒装句等)、定语从句、状语从句、现在分词短语、动词不定式等。 Taps must be turned off after being used.

上下文的连贯性： 连接词、非谓语动词等结构。First of all , in a word等

连接词汇总：

1. 表示目的：for this purpose，for this reason，so that，in order that，so as to，in order to…

2. 表示对照：but，however，yet，on the other hand，on the contrary…

3. 表示结果：so，thus，therefore，as a result

4. 表示因果：because，since，as, for， because of …, owing to

5. 表示强调：indeed，in fact，as a matter of fact

6. 表示并列观点：firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally, first of all, also，and，in addition，besides，what’s more，moreover…, last but not least, what’s worse

7. 表示解释和说明：for example， for instance…

8. 表示比较：like，just like，just as，in the same way，similarly…

9. 表示总结：finally，at last，in short，in a word

10. 表示让步：although，though， even though，no matter wh—

建议记诵的话题词汇和短语：

11. 关系：father, parents , grandfather ,uncle ,aunt ,schoolmate, monitor等，cousin比较加分哦

12. 职业：teacher, doctor, nurse, dentist, cook, artist, scientist, soldier, manager, businessman, journalist等

13. 外貌性格：pretty , good-looking, short , tall, lovely, adorable, naughty, smart , wise, diligent, lazy, humorous, attractive, funny, outgoing, serious, quiet. warm-hearted, patient，strong-minded, hard-working等(介绍外貌时候可用上定语从句，开篇就亮点)

14. 年龄： a twenty-year-old man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 10, during his childhood, middle-aged , in his forties 等

15. 兴趣爱好： enjoy doing, like to do /doing, be fond of, be crazy about, beinterested in , prefer to do/doing

16. 评价： be popular with , be respected by, be honored as, be considered ad, be famous for, be regarded as, set a good example等。

句子：

1. He shows great enthusiasm in pursuing knowledge.

2. She is a ordinary-looking girl with short hair.

3. Not only does she .. but also…

4. He sets us a good example.

5. I’ll never forget the day when…

6. I’m so proud that I have such a good friend.

7. He is considered as an honest, humorous teacher and he is respected and loved by the students and other teachers.

8. Owing to his patient guide and my effort , I learned quite well at the end.

9. Without his help, I would have…

10. It was because of their help and encouragement that I could get the best result.

11. She has a great sense of humorous.

12. She always comforts me when I get into trouble.

13. I’m very grateful to him for all that he has done for me.

14. During the process of my growth, there are lots of people I want to thank, but the person I want to thank most is…

15. I want to thank sb. from the bottom of my heart.

(1)

时光匆匆，不知不觉中，同学们的初中生活即将结束，你们有一个懵懂的孩童成长为有知识有理想的少年。在你们成长的历程中，渗透了父母的心血，充满了师长的关爱，得到了朋友的帮助，请以My_______________为题，写一篇短文，描述你心中最重要的人或最令你难忘的人。

要求：1. 把题目补充完整。

2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。

3. 词数在60 - 80之间。

4. 内容要齐全，包括以下几点：

Who is the person in your heart?

Why is the person so important in your heart?

What will you learn from the person in the future?

参考范文：

My father is a hero in my heart. Although he has been away for many years, he still lives in my heart now.

As a father of the five children, he knew his duty. When I was a little girl, I thought my father never knew tired. He always worked and worked. He was a man of great strength both physically and in the mind.

My father not only worked hard to support the whole family, but also looked after my ailing(多病的) mother. Day and night, he struggled for years with mother's disease. At last, my mother recovered because of my father's love and help. However, my father, a man who was great and gentleness, fell down. I lost my hero. He was too tired. He slept for ever.

A few years has passed, but I think my father never left me. He always smiles at me and lives in my heart. I know I have my father's love. It gives me courage to do anything, to face any difficulties in my life.

From him, I will learn to stand up straightly, to be proud of who I am!

2. A Real Friend

提示：朋友，是思想上值得依赖，情感上可以依托，学习上能得到帮助，生活上给予关照的人。请写一、两件事情来讲述你和朋友之间真挚的友情。

要求：1、请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文，词数不少于60个;

2、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;

3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计;

4、短文必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷作答，一律不得分。

参考范文：

A Real Friend

Everyone needs friends. Friendship plays an important role in our lives. Friends can encourage us to be better and share our hopes and dreams. Amy is a real friend like this.

When I became a middle school student, I don't do well in English or math. I fell behind others. I was worried and upset. At that time, Amy often lent me her notebooks and came to my house to help me after school. When I wanted to give up, she always encouraged me to hold on, Thanks to Amy, a month later I caught up with others. Now both of us are in Grade 9, we have the same dreams - to be a student in a good university. I think we can achieve our dreams.

A friend in need is a friend indeed. Amy is such a good friend.

记诵词组

1. suffer from 遭受, 忍受

2. thanks to 多亏了

3. get/be used to sth./doing sth. 习惯于

4. be absorbed in 专心于，全神贯注于

5. concentrate on sth. 专注于

6. share your happiness and sadness with sb. 和某人分享你的快乐和痛苦

7. pursue knowledge 追求知识

8. be in trouble 处于困境中，遇到麻烦

9. depend on sb. to do sth. 依靠某人做某事

10. to be honest 老实说

11. encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事

12. be popular with sb. 受到某人的欢迎

13. strengthen our friendship 增进我们的友谊 promote our friendship

14. benefit a lot from sth. 从...中受益良多

15. speak highly of sb. 对某人评价高

16. get along well with sb. 和某人相处得好

17. put one’s heart into sth. 用心对待某事

18. make progress 取得进步

19. have trouble in doing sth. 做某事有困难

20. come true 实现

21. realize/achieve one’s dream 实现某人的梦想

22. enjoy doing sth. like to do sth. / like doing sth. be fond of sth. / doing sth. be crazy about sth. / doing sth.

refer doing sth. to doing sth.

23. is of great help for sb. 对某人有很大的帮助= very helpful lose one’s temper 发脾气

写作练习：(叙事篇)

1.力求简洁，阐明核心人物和事件，无需过多细节—删

2.连词必须有，按照时间顺序在句子之间加上承接或转折的词或词组，保持叙事连贯，没有不相干的内容—增

3.注意句式多样化，用so…that, not…until, which, unless或者倒装、状语前置、分词、从句等等方式，让行文丰富起来—改

4.注意时态，叙事多为一般过去时—查

写作练习：(保护环境篇)

As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. In some places we can't see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Bird there is less and less fresh water in the world.Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do? How to protect our environment? For example, we can go toschool on foot or by bike instead of taking a car. We had better use shopping basketbets instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. We should use both sides of the paper when we write. Do't use paper cups.At our school dinning room, use our own bowls and chopsticks instead of disposable ones. We can reuse the water and save the electricity.In a word, ifeveryone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better."There is only one earth", I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

写作练习：(旅游景点篇)

二、介绍地点 (旅游等)

词

名词：Canada, France, Japan, the United States. Australia, Singapore, the United Kingdom, country, Sydney, New York, Paris, Toronto, Tokyo, language, Japanese, world, French, office, post office, library, restaurant, bank, street, pay phone, avenue, center, bridge, neighborhood, garden, district, tour, place, way, taxi, airport, map, shop, hospital, station, direction, New York City, guide, center, corner, the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, Tian’an Men Square, Hutong, culture, bicycle, subway, car, train, bus stop, train station, minute, kilometer, mile, river, town, theater, cinema, radio station, screen, jeans, service, clothing store, train, subway, on vacation, the capital of, history, colorful history, space museum, amusement park, zoo, water park, tour guide, tourist, island,

动词：visit, arrive, take, visit, think of, take a taxi, turn left, take photos, worry, get to, be close to, think about, do a survey, travel, take the train, live in, fall in love with, be in style, be welcomed by, take a ride, consider, translate, provide, sail, continue, take it easy, provide sb. with sth, offer sb. sth, be willing to…, dream of…, hold on to…

形容词：international, west, fantastic, awful, delicious, expensive, crowded, cheap, quick, early, trendy, comfortable, easy, worse, worst, loud, lovely, cheap, dull, huge, famous, wonderful, foreign, natural, strange, beautiful, relaxing, fun, dangerous, interesting, boring, exciting, tiring, peaceful, lively, crowded, expensive, hot

句

There is a supermarket.

It’s on Center Street.

It’s across from the bank.

It’s next to the post office.

It’s between the restaurant and the supermarket.

Have a good trip. Have a good time.

howtime cinema is the cheapest.

Gold theatre has the most comfortable seats.

The most popular clothes store is Jason’s .

It has the best quality clothing.

As for radio stations, most people think that Jazz 107.9 FM is really great.

We did a survey of our readers and this what we learned.

I love places where the people are friendly.

I hope to see/visit…one day/some day.

I’d like to go somewhere relaxing/interesting….

For your next vacation, why not consider visiting…?

It has…/ doesn’t have…

We can do lots of outdoor activities. It is convenient to …

亮点提升:

1. 词组

计划及希望：will do, be going to do, want to do, plan to do, decide to do, make up one’s mind to do…, would like to do, be about to do, hope to do, hope +从句

喜好及兴趣：like / enjoy doing, be fond of doing, be keen on doing, prefer to do, be interested in sth /doing sth., be impressed by,

其他活动：spend time doing, can’t help doing, suit sb. just fine, look forward to sth/doing sth. relax oneself, experience the life,

介绍方位：south, north, west, east, in front of, between, opposite, next to, across from, near…

2. 句型从句 too…to, so that, not only…but also…, why not, make sb. adj., that/which/who

3. 非谓语结构：It’s +adj. for sb. to do, doing sth is…

e.g. For your next vacation, why not consider visiting Beijing?

ird Nest, which was built for the 2008 Olympic games, is the largest stadium in Beijing

eijing, the capital of China, is famous for its long history and splendid culture.

eijing duck (snacks) is one of the most delicious foods, which you should never miss.

eijing is a lovely place where the people are friendly and warm-hearted.

Only when you come yourself, can you experience its charm.

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2008 四川自贡中考作文

北京将迎来2008年的奥运会，请以主人的身份向外国朋友介绍一下北京和北京几个著名的景点。根据以下提示写一篇短文。

1. 北京是一个历史悠久的城市;

2. 北京有许多名胜古迹;

3. 紫禁城是最受来宾欢迎的景点之一;

4. 故宫非常漂亮和著名;

5. 长城也是非常美丽可去一看的地方;

6. 天安门广场是一个好去处，可去漫步;

注意：1. 词数80左右。

2. 请不要逐字翻译，可适当添加细节，使行文连贯、意思完整、符合逻辑。

3. 参考词汇：紫禁城 the Forbidden City, 故宫 the Imperial Palace, 天安门广场Tian’anmen Square

优秀范文：

As the 29th Olympic Games is just around the corner, more and more foreigners are coming to Beijing. In order to help them know more about it, I am glad to say something about our great capital.

eijing is a large city with a long history. There are many places of interest in Beijing, such as the Forbidden City, the Imperial Palace, Tian’anmen Square, the Great Wall and so on. The Forbidden City is one of the most favorite places where our foreign friends like to go. The Imperial Palace, which is beautiful and famous, is also a place worth visiting. You can see a lot of culture relics there. If you want to know more about the Great Wall, you will have to go there. As you know, there is a Chinese saying, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man. ”Walking on the Tian’anmen Square, you will feel it is one of the greatest squares in the world. If you go there early in the morning, maybe you can see your national flag rising ceremony.

I am sure you will have a great time in Beijing.

如何提高初中英语写作能力经典集锦 4

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点：实际上英语写作就等于翻译!因为英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写得再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。文章的内容，要做到全，围绕要点中心进行论述。

结构：中考英语写作最流行的结构就是三段式，深受阅卷老师的喜爱。因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话。

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，what's more，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：语法是硬性的要求，文章中不得出现语法上的错误。如单词、短语的使用、时态等。这和平时扎实的基本功有直接关系。

亮点：要想得到一等文，亮点至关重要。运用高级一点的词汇、词组、句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。其次，平时多收集一些名言警句、地道的谚语等都可以为文章加分哦！所以，要想提高英语写作技巧，平时要养成多听、多说、阅读和笔记的好习惯，将优美的语句背熟记牢，在必要时为我所用！

初中英语作文写作技巧,高分英语作文写作方法

初中英语作文写作小妙招

首先、模仿范文是英语写作入门的必经阶段，因为小学生所掌握的英语词汇和语法知识有限，他们初涉作文领地，大部分学生都会感觉“无从下笔”或者即使冥思苦想拼凑好一篇短文，也难以避免多处的单词拼写和语法错误。所以，提供一两篇优质的范文供初学者模范学习是相当有必要的。由于较少发现有同步作文集的书籍，。成就一篇文章本身是一个创造性的思维过程，但是通常也不能抹杀习作模仿带给作者的灵感和启迪。为初学英文写作的学生提供范文，一方面可以帮助他们克服惧写的心理障碍，另一方面可以引导他们用较规范的句式去表达观点或描述事物，避免因语法知识的缺陷而胡乱拼凑“中国式英语句子”的现象。

其次、熟悉体裁，掌握格式，认真审题，确定主干，英语写作中，主要有以下几种体裁的文章格式：记述文、说明文、日记、书信、通知、便条和其它。每一种体裁都有其表达要求，学生应认真审题，确定主干，开展写作。所谓文章的“主干”，无非是两点：文章的主要时态；文章内容的侧重点，即要围绕主题。

再次、写作是一种语言输出的过程，需要大脑的积极思考，这种语言输出的能力不是大考前短时间内能制造出来的，更不是掌握了很多语法知识就自动具有的，它需要经过长期不懈的练习才能获得。开始时学生的习作可能只有几句非常简单的话，但随着英语学习的不断深入，学生作品的内容也会不断丰富。循序渐进地培养学生写作能力的措施有很多。

最后一点、多背诵一些句子，然后模仿。背诵的句子，基本都在课文里。所以，小学生作文最重要的还是在背诵。

如何提高初中英语写作能力经典集锦 5

为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以How to be a good learner?为题的征文比赛活动，请写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。

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How to be a good learner?

As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.

We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.

I think all these above will be helpful to us.